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Originally Posted by D as in David
With the 47th, they selected Stankoven, with the absolute understanding they have the very next pick allowing them to pick another player which they likely valued somewhat similarly since they could have picked them in reverse order knowing that they would get both players that they wanted at that place in the draft. *(my apologies for the structure of this sentence - oof)
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Don't apologize. I've worked as an editor, and I can tell you with assurance: That is an absolutely beautiful sentence. Every clause follows clearly and logically from the one before, and I had no trouble understanding exactly what you meant. I wasn't even aware of how long the sentence was until you slipped in that apology at the end.
Some people would have sprinkled in a couple more commas, but that is a matter of personal taste.