10-23-2014, 09:18 AM
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NOT breaking news
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Calgary
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CP Thesaurus Help
Hey CPers, I tried to Thesaurus but couldn't come up with a good substitute. I'm having a hard time editing this sentence for a brochure:
"(Product) Solutions provides all operational and maintenance requirements"
Firstly, you'd probably want provide, but I hate provide. And provide doesn't really work, either. Basically, we eliminate the requirements by doing them ourselves but the way we have this structured, I can't use eliminates.
If I were to rewrite it it would say:
"(Product) Solutions covers all operational and maintenance requirements".
That's proper but I don't want to use 'covers' and can't think of a better word. I know yinz guys are wordsmithy...any ideas?
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10-23-2014, 09:20 AM
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Playboy Mansion Poolboy
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Close enough to make a beer run during a TV timeout
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"(Product) Solutions manages all operational and maintenance requirements."
Or if you really want to get buzz wordy:
"(Product) Solutions takes ownership of all operational and maintenance requirements."
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10-23-2014, 09:22 AM
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Franchise Player
Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: Calgary
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"(Product) Solutions encompasses all operational and maintenance requirements." ???
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10-23-2014, 09:23 AM
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Powerplay Quarterback
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handles.
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10-23-2014, 09:29 AM
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#5
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Crash and Bang Winger
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Exceeds? Satisfies? Meets and exceeds?
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10-23-2014, 09:31 AM
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Franchise Player
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Fulfills?
Achieves?/Aids achievement?
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10-23-2014, 09:33 AM
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Franchise Player
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(Product) Solutions adheres to all operational and maintenance requirements
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10-23-2014, 09:33 AM
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Basement Chicken Choker
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: In a land without pants, or war, or want. But mostly we care about the pants.
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(Product) Solutions masters your puny operational and maintenance requirements with a mere fraction of our awe-inspiring might, while meanwhile, in his secret underwater lair, Our Competitor yet again plots to deceive you with his inferior, laughably inept product line.
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10-23-2014, 09:40 AM
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Franchise Player
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Would it work to reverse the order? Some words previously discarded may sound better if the order is reversed.
For instance:
Operational and maintenance requirements are/can be (achieved) *[at power levels over 9000]* through the use of services provided by (Product) Solutions?
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10-23-2014, 09:45 AM
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Unfrozen Caveman Lawyer
Join Date: Oct 2002
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solves
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10-23-2014, 10:05 AM
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Franchise Player
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(Product) Solutions synergizes all operational and maintenance requirements.
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10-23-2014, 10:24 AM
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NOT breaking news
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Calgary
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Quote:
Originally Posted by JonDuke
"(Product) Solutions encompasses all operational and maintenance requirements." ???
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Quote:
Originally Posted by DoubleF
Would it work to reverse the order? Some words previously discarded may sound better if the order is reversed.
For instance:
Operational and maintenance requirements are/can be (achieved) *[at power levels over 9000]* through the use of services provided by (Product) Solutions?
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I sent them these two, thanks! 
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10-23-2014, 10:33 AM
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Powerplay Quarterback
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obviates? supplants?
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10-23-2014, 10:44 AM
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#14
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Not a casual user
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: A simple man leading a complicated life....
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"(Product) Solutions aspires to consummate all operational and maintenance requirements" "
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10-23-2014, 11:33 AM
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Franchise Player
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Quote:
Originally Posted by GirlySports
I sent them these two, thanks! |
Assumed you edited it to be more business appropriate before sending it out.
But if boss likes power over 9000, that's ok too. 
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10-23-2014, 11:42 AM
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Scoring Winger
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Syracuse, NY
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Hodors
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10-23-2014, 11:46 AM
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Franchise Player
Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: Calgary
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Quote:
Originally Posted by rbochan
Hodors
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10-23-2014, 12:11 PM
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#18
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Franchise Player
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: wearing raccoons for boots
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'Let us embiggin your heretofore cromulent work'
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10-23-2014, 12:36 PM
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#19
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Franchise Player
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Facilitates
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10-23-2014, 12:39 PM
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#20
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Franchise Player
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delivers (for the win)
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