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Originally Posted by Par
I have fixed the sentence, sorry about that.
If we have someone in the top of the scoring, it will only help. The Flames depth is nice but they need to come through when the teams needs it.
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"If we want to be a Stanley Cup team, than
then we need some one
someone to be in the Art Ross discussion. (This can be someone inside the organization or outside, I read this in the Hockey News Magazine(they are talking about the Flames.)
Two open brackets, one closed bracket"
Do you mean we need an Art Ross candidate for The Hockey News Magazine to consider use a Stanley Cup contender? Are you saying The Hockey News wrote that we need an Art Ross candidate and you took it as fact? I'm not trying to be the grammar police but I think some clarity is necessary, especially when this is the "fixed" sentence.