I really liked the whole plotline of Naomi on Marco's ship, but I'm curious to know if in the books it would have been more uninterrupted? Going between Naomi's storyline and the other simultaneous storylines, the others all were more dramatic. That kinda deflated the tension of the Naomi/Marco/Phillip drama.
Last edited by octothorp; 01-18-2021 at 04:48 PM.
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