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Originally Posted by ThePrince
Zing!
You’re not enjoying this as much as I am?
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It’s not your best work tbh. You’re hitting all the notes (narrative, goal posts, the “here’s you” quote that’s supposed to be inner thought, etc) and I don’t know if they’re just a little played out or that it feels like you’re trying too hard, but it’s definitely missing that spark.