[D as in David]

Originally Posted by Jay Random

Don't apologize. I've worked as an editor, and I can tell you with assurance: That is an absolutely beautiful sentence. Every clause follows clearly and logically from the one before, and I had no trouble understanding exactly what you meant. I wasn't even aware of how long the sentence was until you slipped in that apology at the end.

Some people would have sprinkled in a couple more commas, but that is a matter of personal taste.

Thanks! I was sure it was bad enough for a temporary CP ban. Or, at a minimum, a paddling.