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Old 05-03-2023, 12:59 PM   #931
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Originally Posted by TheScorpion View Post
In fairness (as someone who's been to journalism school) the industry standard for most news article writing is 1–3 sentences to a paragraph. Any longer and it starts to look more like an essay. Brevity is key when writing to a wide audience.

But Bell takes that to the absolute extreme. Comes across like he's trying to beat you over the head with every single line.
That's his audience though.

The ones that lose focus after a sentence.

The ones that have short thoughts.

He can't put multiple sentences in a paragraph.

His readers would find it uncomfortable.

Then they wouldn't feel he's one of them.
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