In fairness (as someone who's been to journalism school) the industry standard for most news article writing is 1–3 sentences to a paragraph. Any longer and it starts to look more like an essay. Brevity is key when writing to a wide audience.
But Bell takes that to the absolute extreme. Comes across like he's trying to beat you over the head with every single line.
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