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Old 10-13-2020, 01:04 PM   #715
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Originally Posted by Locke View Post
Irvin Kershner knocked that one out of the park.

I've always said that Lucas is brilliant at envisioning a story, and a whole universe. He's extremely detailed on that side of things and everything fits together well. But get him into the nitty gritty beyond writing a treatment, you know dialogue stuff etc and he struggles.



He did this with Irvin. Here's the story, here's the character list, here's how things should fit, now its up to you to write the story. It was brilliant.



The story in the PT itself is smart and makes sense, its the details and dialogue that hurt it and that there were some things in there that gained too much focus.


Imagine giving a guy like IK the job of writing and showing the fall of Anakin, and no fracking I hate Sand monologues.
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