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Old 01-15-2007, 08:06 AM   #23
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Originally Posted by killer_carlson View Post
para 3: Why would you waste the readers time telling him or her about two examples of why you are right (the previous two paragraps) and then tell them about why someone else might be right. To me that reeks of someone who isn't sure about their position and hasn't the confidence to pick a good thesis in the first place.
Because this is the way you're actually required to do it and you won't get full marks unless you have this in there.
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