Good work and concept. I preferred the first one. Except one major snag I will never get on board with (and I think I've mentioned in this thread before).
The color below the waist stripe should never be all white like that. Very bad look. I don't mind some white there, but as stripe, not the weird diaper look it creates by having the entire bottom section white. I don't like that design on the away either, even though it is red below the waist.
The white bottom portion on the home and the red bottom portion on the away should be a stripe, not a total color flip below the yellow.
On the home it should go red (primary), yellow stripe, red, white stripe, red.
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