This is where I think it would benefit to break the story up a bit. They could have used this 10 minute sequence to build some suspense. Show the start of this episode, up until her body washed up on the beach and the girls find it and poke her a bit with a spear. And that's it. Leave us wonder for a week who these people are, what happened to Heath and what will happen to Tara. Then they could cut to Hilltop and The Kingdom. They could have broke these 3 stories into 3 weeks of compelling TV. Telling each story from start to finish in each episode is the issue here.
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