Cut . . . .
Ok, what you said, can you re state it in a more dramatic style . . . here's an onion, rub it on your eyeballs.
All right lighting can you give her some lightning to make her look sinister.
Sweat . . . .we need more sweat
Ok, and you two, when we run this look at each other and nod knowingly
Alrite roll film annnnd action
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My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings;
Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!
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