Love the illustrations, a couple chuckles, great work. One small suggestion, it might have a little more punch and humour if it was a little less wordy. The best example is in week three when the owner asks about the bee. It adds nothing to the strip. There are a few other things you could shorten or eliminate I think. Brevity is important in humour AND comics.
I am of course talking from my ass cause I can't do it, but just a thought.
I do like it though, and love to see someone working at something they love. Keep it up, I want to see more!
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