Thread: [CP Story] Rebuild Gravy
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Old 04-23-2015, 12:04 PM   #8
Dienasty
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You should have the paragraphs after the table showing rookies/GP/points in front, that way people will know what the table is trying to present. Then after the table explain the point you are trying to make. Just moving the following paragraph and altering it a bit should work.

"Four rookies sit atop the rookie scoring race, and the Flames have two of the four."
I think you want to take out the bolded "rookie" above

Overall entertaining article, thanks!
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