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Old 03-06-2015, 04:49 PM   #53
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That was really hard to read.

In case Ryan is eyeing this thread, I greatly recommend this vital book:

On Writing Well by William Zinsser

It is an indispensable resource to ensure clarity of message.
Kind of what I was thinking as well. It's not just his topic, which grates on me to no end, but his writing style is worse than a high school student's. Reeks of immaturity.

I'm not so sensitive to not be able to read a well thought out, unbiased article detailing the shortcomings of my team, but at no point does he write anything that is convincing in any way.

Just another journalism school flunky who has landed in the world of blogs.
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