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Old 10-23-2014, 09:40 AM   #9
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Would it work to reverse the order? Some words previously discarded may sound better if the order is reversed.

For instance:
Operational and maintenance requirements are/can be (achieved) *[at power levels over 9000]* through the use of services provided by (Product) Solutions?
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