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Old 10-23-2014, 10:18 AM   #1
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Default CP Thesaurus Help

Hey CPers, I tried to Thesaurus but couldn't come up with a good substitute. I'm having a hard time editing this sentence for a brochure:

"(Product) Solutions provides all operational and maintenance requirements"

Firstly, you'd probably want provide, but I hate provide. And provide doesn't really work, either. Basically, we eliminate the requirements by doing them ourselves but the way we have this structured, I can't use eliminates.

If I were to rewrite it it would say:

"(Product) Solutions covers all operational and maintenance requirements".


That's proper but I don't want to use 'covers' and can't think of a better word. I know yinz guys are wordsmithy...any ideas?
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