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Originally Posted by Split98
Something I was sitting on for a week...
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Okay, I apologize for being a dick in the previous post, so here is an honest critique of your logo work.
The space you are designing a logo for is a long horizontal space, and you have presented a series of square logos, failing to use most of the space. As well, the majority of your logo becomes unreadable when it is scaled down to the size of presentation (240x125). This is a failing of the current logo as well, probably a motivator for a new logo.
On to player outlines, the Monahan image is terrible. It looks like he's got one really short leg, so unless you are going for a pirate theme, a guy with a short leg doesn't look good. Unless you have the photo to get what he's doing, the whole outline is going to be lost on those unfamiliar with the original image. McGrattan? Well no comment. On to the outline images you selected, outside of the MLB logo, which is a classic, the other ones have aged. The NBA logo features a player in short shorts, that haven't been in use since the 80's. The NHLPA logo is a bad layering of a player on tube skates, not seen since the 70's. Those could use an update themselves. Love the Air Jordan logo, though. Classic! Skylines do age quickly, and could require immediate updates. Some of the treatments shown are very cool, but as new buildings pop up it does make the graphic look dated. Just something to guard against IMO.
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Originally Posted by doctajones428
Um, no.
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I stand corrected.