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Old 08-03-2014, 09:00 PM   #5
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This sentence fragment "but I’d label them a dark horse, albeit as a long shot" is a redundancy and is driving me crazy.

Actually, now that I look again, that is not the only error in that sentence. I guess the "writers" part of THE HOCKEY WRITERS is a term that is used pretty loosely.

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