I like the new design better.
Is it still for a poster? If so, I don't understand the use of the social media icons. They distract and detract from the overall image. I'd put your website address on the poster and make sure all your social media links are on the site.
If you're still looking for a tag line, how about something like: "Personal Time", "Time for Yourself", "The Time of Your Life", "Time to Relax"?
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