Neither version tells the viewer what COMO DESIGNS does. This is a big negative. Your company name is not yet widely known and recognized to assume that people would know what you are advertising. Is is a novelty clock shop? Graphic design company? Custom clock design shop?
If this is going to be just a logo on a business card, then it's way too busy. So, I assume this is some kind of advertising to placed somewhere, correct?
Depending on where it is going to be posted, I suggest re-thinking your message to viewers. What do you want this sign to achieve? Boost name recognition? Have your future customers come visit your shop or website? Call you first? The answers would lead you to what textual information you need to supply along with the graphics to make this ad effective.
Good luck!
P.S. Just re-read that this is going to be a poster at your retail location. My suggestions still stand though.
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