[CaptainCrunch]

Its always tough to critique this because you come across like a jerk at times.

I agree that the font isn't the right font, its not really an elegant font and makes it look like an afterthought. You know I'm tired and almost done I'll just use San Sarif.

I don't like the shadowing behind the clock. It just has a really fake look to it. Like you laid the clock on a picture instead of putting the clock in the field.

The placement of the grass on the front of the clock is actually really distracting, not good if your clock is the key part of your marketing concept.

For some reason the hazy background markets really break up the background in a bad way. Its like the Jay and Silent Bob scene when they run into a scenic panic and complain that Hollywood is so fake.

I'm wondering what your theme is here? In terms of doing anything from a marketing standpoint or branding standpoint, you need to be able to tell us why? If its just that you think that a clock in a grasslands is cool then great. But it just looks a little forced.

Maybe lighten up the tinging on the clock. Right now with the bright white behind the hands and the the tinging around it just makes your clock look dirty.

The overly green grass distracts from the clock. Don't get me wrong its a very nice clock, but the stuff around it really distracts from the clock so that it becomes secondary.

Not to be mean, but as an artistic piece in a abstract concept its ok, as a marketing piece I'm not sure its the direction that I would go in.

Sorry.