Okay here are my takes. I know I've kind of ruined the skies with these edits but in better hands that wouldn't happen.
Every time I open Photoshop, I am reminded how much I suck at it. Anyways, these should give you a rough idea. What I'm trying to convey is that the landscapes look a lot better if they're not glowing, and cleaning up the clocks makes your product look better. I would seriously recommend hiring someone who knows what they're doing for this though (edit: or get Psychenet). I know you're a DIY kind of guy but this is perhaps not the place for that.