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Originally Posted by SebC
A few places where it could be improved:
- You cut of the corner of the clock, not good. Hopefully it's a crop and you can fix that.
- HDR is overcooked... in particular, the radioactive green grass beside the clock pulls attention away from the clock. The magenta area in the upper left corner is also a distraction.
- It looks like there's been a blue grain applied to the clock but with the holes and hands masked off. If I'm correct in that being a photoshop effect and not an actual feature of the clock then I would remove the grain from the entire clock. Or maybe just not use the effect at all.
- Having the clock at an angle is okay, but I would have the closer end at the side and have it lead you into the frame.
- I'll echo the recommendation for a thicker, simpler font.
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These photos were cooked using snapseed on my iPhone. I can understand the critique of the photo, unfortunately I couldn't get regulator75 to meet me on Cape Breton earlier this summer.