[SebC]

A few places where it could be improved:

- You cut of the corner of the clock, not good. Hopefully it's a crop and you can fix that.
- HDR is overcooked... in particular, the radioactive green grass beside the clock pulls attention away from the clock. The magenta area in the upper left corner is also a distraction.
- It looks like there's been a blue grain applied to the clock but with the holes and hands masked off. If I'm correct in that being a photoshop effect and not an actual feature of the clock then I would remove the grain from the entire clock. Or maybe just not use the effect at all.
- Having the clock at an angle is okay, but I would have the closer end at the side and have it lead you into the frame.
- I'll echo the recommendation for a thicker, simpler font.