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Old 08-12-2013, 05:26 PM   #626
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So a friend of mine came over for beers and we were trying to come up with a way to make this work out where you could combine some of the old lore with the new so called breed while bringing in some of the EU stuff as well.

In terms of cast

Luke - Jedi Master
Leia - Head of State
Han Solo - Semi Drunken former husband of head of state
Jaina Solo - Jedi Padawan
Jacen Solo - Jedi Knight
Ben Skywalker - Jedi Padawan

Since the end of the civil war there has been 30 years of relative peace with the Empire. The battle lines have stabilized with occassional scrimmages along a demilitarized zone. Luke Skywalker who is now close to 70 years old has contented himself with rebuilding the Jedi Order and training a new generation of Jedi Knights to bring peace and harmony to the New Republic. Since the end of the Empire many of the old hero's have died. Mon Mothma died several years ago and Leia was elected to the position of Head of State of the New Republic by the re-constituted and often hostile Senate. Han Solo drifted away after a nasty divorce and proceeded to take up smuggling again to spite his ex wife by breaking the law on both sides of the border. Chewbacca died of feline aids and he was replaced by a new cute and fuzzy co-pilot.

Meanwhile Luke has decided to send his two Padawan's Jaina and Ben (his son) by a marriage to a woman long dead) on their first stand alone mission to the long dead world of Naboo a planet devastated by Imperial bombardment just after the end of the Galactic Civil War by a vengeful Empire. He has heard a rumor of a Sith Holocron and the Jedi mandate is to recover all Sith objects to keep from the long dead Sith from rising again.

He decides to send Jacen Solo a promising Jedi Knight with them.

They depart and make their way to Naboo a planet with shattered cities and corpses. They make their way to the basement of the capital building and in the basement they find a hidden room. Inside they find a pyramid shaped Holocron and Jacen decides to activate it. The three offspring of the original hero's sit down around the holocron and it softly activates and a cloaked figure begins to speak.

"Hello and welcome my friends, I am glad to see people who are enlightened enough to follow knowledge. The knowledge on this holocron has been waiting for people like you who want to bring justice and security to the galaxy and wish to bring true balance to the force. Sadly if you are seeing this it means I'm dead and I beg you my friends to use my power however you see fit, and unlock all the secrets of the Force"

You might not recognize me based on my elder years, but I thought that due to a bit of vanity on my part that I would present my younger self to you. My name is Palpatine and I have a story to tell"

The scene fades to black and we transition back to Coruscant many months later where a concerned Leia on the way to a peace summit with the Empire begs Luke to find her Children. she then departs but her ship never reaches the conference as it explodes in orbit over the negotiating site the wreckage of Alderaan. At the same time Luke calls Han Solo and breaks the news of his kids. Solo agrees to get Luke and go find the young Jedi. They go off and start searching and we can get some minor intrigue thrown in as they head to Naboo.

They finally reach Naboo and they don't find the children, they find the crushed wreckage of the holocron and the crumpled robe of Ben Skywalker who was run through with a light saber. Luke at the same time finds out about the death of his sister and angrily blames the Empire and believes that they have found a dark jedi that survived order 66 all of those years ago. He wants to fly off to the new center of the Empire The Bastian in the deep core. After a fierce argument Han talks him out of it and they return to Coruscant, Han leaves Luke there and promised to keep working on finding the kids and tracking down Leia's killer.

Luke is mediating in his room when the door opens, he opens his eyes and states that he felt the intruders presence. The shrouded figure shrugs and a blood red light saber blade slowly grows. A vicious light saber brawl erupts. Meanwhile in orbit around Corsuscant a massive fleet of Star Destroyers revert to real space they surround a massive Super Star Destroyer. Suddenly we flash back to the light saber duel between Luke and the shrouded assailant. Luke is realizing that he . . . . just . . . doesn't have the . . . . strength that he used too. But he desperately fights because his death won't help anyone. At the same time every screen and every system in the republic changes to a cloaked figure sitting on a ornate throne, on each side there is an Imperial Red Guard. The voice speaks, it is clear and angelic.

"Citizen's of the Republic, it is time to end all of our petty conflicts. It is time to unite the galaxy and its people, to bring families back together and bring order and justice to everyone. Peace has a price, but you don't have to pay it if you choose not too. You have minutes to surrounded of face the forces of the Imperial Star Fleet. Join us or suffer the consequences as we move forward with one leader appointed for life, one Emperor."

Mean while the light saber duel ends as the shrouded figure flips over Luke and rams his saber through Luke from behind. Luke gasps and slumps to his knees as the hooded figure lowers his hood and studies his father with cold yellow eyes and says "I'm sorry father, its time to bring true peace to the galaxy and true balance to the force" He then smirks and strides out as his father's body shimmers and fades. Meanwhile on the mighty super star destroyer the intern head of state agree's to surrender to its new Emperor.

In a hospital somewhere in the outer rim, Ben Skywalkers eyes open and a single tear slides down his face.

End of movie one.
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