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Old 12-16-2011, 10:23 AM   #11
JiriHrdina
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Originally Posted by TheAstonMartian View Post
Hi!


If hired, I can work with dedicated enthusiasm and motivation and am capable of working long hours. I am also very loyal and will always put the company before me.

Sincerely,

Md

Some advice - when talking with potential employers don't use stuff like this to try and get hired. Anyone can say this - and most people do. It is basically the equivalent to hockey players talking about "playing the full 60" and the like - doesn't really mean much.

Employers want to know what makes you different from other candidates in tangible ways. That is difficult when you are starting your career but think back to even your part-time/student jobs and try to use those to talk about real-world examples of where you want above and beyond, achieved success, etc.

Good luck with the hunt!
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