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Old 10-04-2011, 03:01 PM   #28
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Originally Posted by octothorp View Post
It would seem to me that given the meaning, you would want to avoid words that imply seduction: enchanting, beguiling, captivating, ravishing, spellbinding... all of these are adjective forms of verbs that would make the woman an active seductress. It should really be a passive quality.



I actually like luminous a lot for this purpose. It's a gorgeous word itself, and brings up the image of moths to a lantern, which I think is appropriate for the story of Susannah.
I kind of agree. Ravishing is a little too close to ravish which means rape.

The first words I thought of based on the second paragraph in the OP were Fair (like a fair maiden) though this word has multiple meanings,
Gorgeous
Angelic

but I think luminous is best.
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