I don't disagree with you Calf or DFF, it probably would have been more powerful if I had just stuck to the main issue. Gaaa! It just burned me up!

I doubt he would have taken it more seriously without the last two lines anyway. And it's not a conclusion that is a huge stretch. Definitely not as much of a stretch as his anyway. A reactive response, I will admit.
If I try to publish it, I can remove those. It was a first draft.
I'm glad you liked it/thought it was well written otherwise.