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Old 10-16-2009, 12:23 PM   #38
pylon
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MY REVIEW ON THE TOURETTE'S PORTION OF THE REVIEW:

Not a very good representaion of Tourette's. I knew a guy with severe tourette's in school, and it is more ticks, groans, convulsions and screams. Also properly formed or coherent phrases aren't typically used. So the following exerpt of:

"DONKEY SHOW DUH DUH DONKEY SHOW VAGINA ######"
donkey show and vagina ###### are two sets of words that could normally be used together.

would be more believable as:

ARRRRRGHH!! Help! paper DONKEY MWAAAHHM GRrrrrrrrrrAAK! VAGINA PRINTER RIBBON!!

The other thing about it that is slightly problematic:

Its not funny. Even Dane Cook thinks it sucks.
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