Just as another opinion:
I like #1 the best, followed by #3. I think they could do with a crop to take out some of the distracting elements but its a neat horizon with the completely black silhouettes of the trees. I like it and if you worked with those images try to reduce some of the extra stuff to it I think you could have a decent image.
IMO, these are better shots of that horizon than they were of the park.
As for what I'd try to do differently - its hard to say without being there but it looks like there's a brick retaining wall a little ways ahead of where you set up. I'd check to see if you get a decent vantage point from there. Maybe getting closer and a bit lower will help to reduce some of the extra stuff in your picture. If it doesn't add anything to your main subject you should try to get it out of there or reduce its impact.
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