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Old 03-15-2009, 08:43 PM   #35
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9) Ed increases cabinet size to repay friends for sticking with him, costing Albertans millions.
Leaving aside the rather shaky relation of cause/effect in most of these "Top Ten" points, I have to say that if you're looking to get the press to use these as talking points, they have to be done much more professionally.

"A cabinet that is too large and therefore has too many ministers spending money on inessential services" is a talking point; what you have looks like it was written by some redneck who thinks he's folksy by referring to the Premier as "Ed". Same with most of the rest of them, lose the folksy/rant on the internet feel and go for something that doesn't look like it was created by amateurs.
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