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Originally Posted by Prototype
For someone who can write so poetically about fecies, his title doesn't flow as well as his described movement. It should have read "I don't know if I'm ever getting out of here", or "I don't know if I'm ever going to get out of here".
Just some creative help, for someone who may not need it after reading that Reader's Digest worthy scripture.
You must be so proud.
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He is a frequent lurker and will see your kind advice. Though I don't think he was going for any literary award when he wrote it; actually I am a bit surprise he gave me permission to post it. * snicker *
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Originally Posted by Traditional_Ale
I wish we still had skill. I'd nominate them both for red square!
Considering the crappy day ahead, that was an awesome read to start it off!
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Thanks, and I am glad it brightened your day.