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Old 02-25-2008, 04:37 PM   #2
flamesdyehard
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You know what, I thought it was pretty good for a first time. I know I certainly wouldn't do that well. Some things I think could be better are:

-You say oh, and stutter a little bit when things seem to get scrambly or exciting. It's not a bad thing but you need to be able to tell us what is happening. On the first goal it sounded like the puck was behind the net and then "SCOOORREEE". Just a little quicker clearer description would be better.

- I think you have a good radio voice, but you need to add some more lingo to your repitore, just to prevent from being mundane. Use different adjectives to describe chipping a puck up the boards, like slams it up the boards, or whips it up the boards, shoots, etc..

I'm no pro, but I think you have potential, please keep us posted on your progress, good work and enthusiasm.
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