Hey CPers, I tried to Thesaurus but couldn't come up with a good substitute. I'm having a hard time editing this sentence for a brochure:
"(Product) Solutions provides all operational and maintenance requirements"
Firstly, you'd probably want provide, but I hate provide. And provide doesn't really work, either. Basically, we eliminate the requirements by doing them ourselves but the way we have this structured, I can't use eliminates.
If I were to rewrite it it would say:
"(Product) Solutions covers all operational and maintenance requirements".
That's proper but I don't want to use 'covers' and can't think of a better word. I know yinz guys are wordsmithy...any ideas?
Why would you not just ask jammies? You know how to get a hold of him...
Would it work to reverse the order? Some words previously discarded may sound better if the order is reversed.
For instance:
Operational and maintenance requirements are/can be (achieved) *[at power levels over 9000]* through the use of services provided by (Product) Solutions?
