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Originally Posted by FlamesFan68
...The leadership and grit, that Flames management is so high on, must come through with disciplined play. Coach's need to make sure everyone's on the same page. It is time to take that next step. If not, then dust off the golf clubs early again this season.
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Why did you bisect the first relative clause with a comma? And in the second sentence, (the) coach's what?